IELTS General Task 1 Sample Essay #124243
Estimated band 6.5Question
You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter,
say what you have learned in your present job,
suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department,
explain why you do not wish to leave the company.
Sample answer
Dear Sir,
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I am writing this letter to express my interest in taking up the role of supervisor in the burns unit. My role as a staff Nurse in the surgical ward has enlightened me on managing shock, hypoglycemia and hyperglycemia, dressing all kinds of wounds aspectically. I hold a Masters Degree in Emergency nursing. Moving to this new role will challenge me to acquire new skills and knowledge to help with management of burns. I know your looking for someone who has a background in wounds and I belive I qualify for this position.
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I deeply value the supportive culture and opportunities within this organisation and do not wish to leave this facility, because it has nurtured me in becoming resilience, responsible and having a good customer relation. That is why i am always keen to continue my career than seek external opportunities. Thank you for considering my request. I would be happy discussing this further. Yours Faithfully. Hilda Welbeck-Quao